The Before:
The Feels:
Ok, well this one actually made met think about something. Why are all the leads in these stories thin/slim/willowy and not pretty or crazy pretty? It's exhausting to keep hearing these same descriptions over and over again. I'm going to really have to concentrate on this when describing my characters.
The Concerns:
Plot: 1/10
Writing Style: 1/10
Meaningfullness: 2/10
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