The Before:
Meet cute by hitting love interest in the head with a frying pan... That sounds bad, but it also sounds like the Disney movie Tangled!! 👸👸👸👸💖😻
The Feels:
Off to a good start. The dream is actually not too cliche. I like how Kerstan wrote about the lead; she doesn't know how to make hot chocolate and worried to upset the cook if she tries. She decides to make tea. This shows the reader that; 1.) cares about her staff. 2.) self aware as a person 3.) shows her privilege
The Concerns:
Plot: 7/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Meaningfullness: 7/10
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