The Feels:
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What I learned; do not try to write accents unless I am able to speak with someone that knows linguistics. Kept using the world "gel" meaning "girl" and spelled migraine "mergin"... like what? Even using that specific accent it would be "me-grain". Also says Sir Adrian is a marquess... don't make anyone a marquess. That word looks goofy in writing.
Plot: /10
Writing Style: /10
Meaningfullness: /10
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